Morning Sonnet II

So, here's day 2. Amazing I made it this far ;-) 

The first line came to me today as I drove my children to school through the misty morning light. Hope you like it. Comment if you feel inspired xx

Morning Sonnet II

I spied the sun beyond the mist today,

the damp that chilled our bones momentary.

So I knew the trees that troubled our way

were just another flawed commentary.

I drove on, through the dawn, the windows down,

damp hair scrunched up, wild and wanton perhaps.

My eyes wide open, we approached the town,

I handed you our book of AA maps.

I always spy you sat there, outstretched hand

clasping mine tight in the gaps between gears,

holding on to me, like this was all planned,

the fog  just a blanket of fleeting fears.

Slip in beside me, close tight the front door,

show me where we’re going, ‘cause I want more.